That said, unnecessarily padding is going to bore readers
. Is your erotica about the story, the crazy adventure your protagonist goes on? Hell, even if it’s about the sex, is it about all the sex adventures they’re having?
Or perhaps it’s about the type of sex they’re having.
. ” He held up and turned my chin around, “They weren’t lying, you don’t look a day older eighteen. My heart jumped as I heard the familiar sound of metal clinging
That said, unnecessarily padding is going to bore readers
. Is your erotica about the story, the crazy adventure your protagonist goes on? Hell, even if it’s about the sex, is it about all the sex adventures they’re having?
Or perhaps it’s about the type of sex they’re having.
. ” He held up and turned my chin around, “They weren’t lying, you don’t look a day older eighteen. My heart jumped as I heard the familiar sound of metal clinging
That said, unnecessarily padding is going to bore readers
. Is your erotica about the story, the crazy adventure your protagonist goes on? Hell, even if it’s about the sex, is it about all the sex adventures they’re having?
Or perhaps it’s about the type of sex they’re having.
. ” He held up and turned my chin around, “They weren’t lying, you don’t look a day older eighteen. My heart jumped as I heard the familiar sound of metal clinging
